Liquid City Volume 2 Discussion Forum

will post more thumbnails and final pages soon..

Attachment: pg01- jebart laughing satisfactory after his massacre

Attachment: pg02- special unit task drop in

Attachment: pg03- Jebart claims he's invincible with Taming Sari Keris on his hand..so he attacks STU

Attachment: pg04..they thought Jebart is dead..but....he's still alive

will have to see more pages to see where this is going, but artwork looks pretty interesting so far :)

sorry for the late progress and thanks for giving me the chance Sonny,
will try my best to complete it on time.

Attachment: pg05- Jebart still alive and amok again..trying to make his way out.

Attachment: pg06: Jebart make his escape thru window's from 24th floor

Attachment: pg07: Jebart escape and fell on trash bin on an ally & notice familiar face.

Attachment: pg:08 Jebart feel comfort..he knows the lady as her lover..which actualy his therapist

pg09..

Teja the lady, trying to comfort Jebart and persuade him to drop the Keris (Malay dagger)..

pg10..Teja finally manage to persuade Jebart, as Jebart drop his Keris, Teja stab him on the neck with a tranqualiser. Jebart falls.

pg11- Splash page. Teja talks to him com-watch. situation under control. Cynicaly she says.." How strong or mean man are, always fall..weak to a woman"..something like that..will rewrite on the script. the end.

is it ok?..

will post pg10-11 thmbnails tonite...

i noticed..in this thumbnails..from pg05 onwards..by right Jebart torso got wounded marks..shirt got torn..will do it on the final artwork.

Attachment: pg09

Edited by azhar on Saturday, 24 Oct 2009, 2:40am.

final pages of the thumbnails..

the idea is to show..how strong man are.. will falls because of a woman...

Attachment: pg10- Teja finally take down Jebart

Attachment: pg11- Splash page reveal Teja..inform the STU

Have to agree, the artwork does look interesting :) Looking forward to seeing the finished piece! :)

thanks for the compliments..

attach is the thumbnails with dialogue:

thanks for the compliments..

here are thmbnails with texts

thanks..

thumbnails wth texts

sorry..i have trouble posting the work here..
i'm emailing to you Sonny.

trying to put the thmbnails wth texts

Hey Azhar
I can see that your main point is at the last panel(from the POV of Teja) that a warrior no matter how good, will eventually be defeated by beauty. what i don't understand is, why is Jebart(Hang Jebat?) and Taming Sari appear in modern days? If Teja is his therapist, this could be a person who think that he is Hang Jebat, right? What about the Taming Sari? Where did that come from? It seems like the real thing as Jebart is truly invincible when holding the Keris.

I can also see a lot of improvements in your drawing. Those panels are full of life which is great.

Hi Lefty..
thanks for the compliments..
i will try my best to improvise my work ( last 2 years i kinda do a lot of dwg myself..it helps..since becoming stotyboard artist..rather being a teacher)

good to know you get the plot..the other plot ..i want the readers to guess themselves either Jebart is really mad (hallucinating) or he is true that he's the reborn Jebart who runs Amok...initially Jebart has mental illness... a patient of Dr Teja..

another attempt to put my thumbnails with text...(gulp)

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thank god ..it works..

maybe i'm not good enough writing in English..i am open for the dialogue to be edit/re-written..

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the final 3..
any feedbacks and comments are welcome...now moving to the final artwork..(dup..dap..dub..dab..)

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Attachment: 11

here's page01 of my final artwork ( black & white)..
will post color version later..
so is it approve for me to proceed with the other pages?

Attachment: final pg01

final artwrk pg02..

try my best to complete it within this week.
so far is it ok?

Attachment: pg02

progress on the final artwork,,

Attachment: final pg03

Hi..

try my best to complete my comic.
may i request for extension?
really need advice from all of you..should my comic be in B&W or a simple flat color.

thank you

Attachment: pg04

Attachment: pg05

Attachment: pg06

Hi Azhar, the drawings look great. Since you have created midtones using lines already, it would be nice to use flat colours. I think colours would be more suitable as this is a full-colour comic.

thanks for the comment Drewscape
will put flat color then..

here's my progress...

any comment guys?

Attachment: pg07

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Attachment: pg10

Edited by azhar on Thursday, 14 Jan 2010, 6:27pm.

final page..and the comic cover..
now will proceed wth color...

Attachment: pg11-final

Attachment: the comic cover